Connor, this hit me. The writing pulled me right into that space where kindness starts feeling unsafe. Seymour’s innocence and craving for connection reminded me how the best horror is just one heartbeat away from heartbreak. You didn’t only build tension. You built empathy. That’s what makes it land.
That friendship spell scene wrecked me in the best way. It felt like a love story flipped on its head, born out of fear instead of trust. The ending didn’t just shock me. It felt inevitable. The kind that makes you realize the real monster is always human.
You’ve got something special in how you mix emotional truth with terror. Keep building from that space where the scares actually mean something.
I missed this comment! Seriously thank you so much for taking the time to read this. I appreciate the comment more than you know. I’m glad you enjoyed it and felt the emotion while reading.
Connor, this hit me. The writing pulled me right into that space where kindness starts feeling unsafe. Seymour’s innocence and craving for connection reminded me how the best horror is just one heartbeat away from heartbreak. You didn’t only build tension. You built empathy. That’s what makes it land.
That friendship spell scene wrecked me in the best way. It felt like a love story flipped on its head, born out of fear instead of trust. The ending didn’t just shock me. It felt inevitable. The kind that makes you realize the real monster is always human.
You’ve got something special in how you mix emotional truth with terror. Keep building from that space where the scares actually mean something.
I missed this comment! Seriously thank you so much for taking the time to read this. I appreciate the comment more than you know. I’m glad you enjoyed it and felt the emotion while reading.
No problem whatsoever it was really good. Enjoy your weekend.